💥𝘼𝙣𝙤𝙩𝙝𝙚𝙧 𝘾𝙡𝙞𝙚𝙣𝙩 𝙃𝙞𝙧𝙚𝙙 &𝙒𝙞𝙩𝙝 𝙈𝙪𝙡𝙩𝙞𝙥𝙡𝙚 𝙅𝙤𝙗 𝙊𝙛𝙛𝙚𝙧𝙨 𝙄𝙣𝙘𝙡𝙪𝙙𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙖 14% 𝙎𝙖𝙡𝙖𝙧𝙮 𝙄𝙣𝙘𝙧𝙚𝙖𝙨𝙚!💥
🙋♂️ Kristen came to me as a Business Analyst with First Citizens Bank, seeking a lateral move but focusing on the HR business analysis function.
The resolutions we provided were:
👉 Finding a format that resonates with her new targeted role.
👉 Building up her transferable HR and data analysis skills, methodologies, KPIs, and wins.
👉 Improved messaging so readers know what she was trying to do and what value she can offer.
👉 More skills that are ATS compliant so she can stand out in a highly competitive industry and role.
👉 Elevated experience section so she demonstrated more accomplishments, value offerings, and metrics over tasks.
👉 The proper layout and format (in order) including a Summary, Key Skills/Technical Aptitude, Accomplishments, Experience, Education, Certification/Training, Affiliation, and Volunteerism.
💥 Well, it worked!
💥 Kristen sent me this wonderful note, which I just had to share! He is now an HR Business Analyst for a private firm in the financial space! Way to go Kristen!
“Hi Matt, Apologies for my delay in responding. I went ahead and updated the projects and awards section, removed the awards from the individual positions, and updated the title to Business Analyst from Business Systems Analyst. I did have two interviews for that position and did not feel like that was a good fit. However, I am pleased to announce that I have accepted a position as an HR Business Analyst, which will be an internal promotion with a 12% increase in pay. Now for my dilemma – I still have my job candidacy with two other positions. One is internal and I had a second interview yesterday before the job offer. One is external and I told the recruiter I was still interested yesterday before the job offer. Out of the three positions, the HR Business Analyst position that I felt was the best fit for me. What is the best way to withdraw my application for the other two positions after I very recently expressed interest? Thanks again for all your assistance. Kristen”
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